ikari214567
CPRan Senior
Number of posts : 121
Age : 33
Localisation : Fairview, Quezon City
Registration date : 2007-08-02
 |  Subject: Nothing to do...  Sat Sep 01, 2007 3:44 pm | |
| ArcMithril... Starshower, it was the signal of destiny. For everything was changing
, but I stayed the same, with sweet beginnings and bitter ends, Now that I've loved you, there's no return. I'll kiss you, but nobody needs to know. All my life, I've never felt so wanted. I wrote this poem for someone real special to me, it's still incomplete though...  Please comment on it, suggestions on how to make it longer, and maybe some verses... thanks!  | |
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yzshia21
CPRAn Club Leader
Number of posts : 252
Age : 38
Registration date : 2007-08-04
| | Subject: Re: Nothing to do... Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:10 pm | |
| it's actually kinda short and ang bilis mu magjump into comclusion. i mean you used perfect words pero mabilis ung story nya.. something like that! | |
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ikari214567
CPRan Senior
Number of posts : 121
Age : 33
Localisation : Fairview, Quezon City
Registration date : 2007-08-02
| | Subject: Re: Nothing to do... Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:28 pm | |
| ArcMithril... Yup.. that's why I need your help, you guys... The poem is just too short.. I already added some verses it's actually quite long now... Thnx anyway I'll just post the complete version of the poem when it's done hope you'll all like it.. | |
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yzshia21
CPRAn Club Leader
Number of posts : 252
Age : 38
Registration date : 2007-08-04
| | Subject: Re: Nothing to do... Sun Sep 02, 2007 8:09 pm | |
| ako i wanted to make music and lyrics sa church namin!! ahahahaha gusto ko magcompose^_^ un muna pagkakabalahan ko ngaun!  :P:P:P:P | |
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ikari214567
CPRan Senior
Number of posts : 121
Age : 33
Localisation : Fairview, Quezon City
Registration date : 2007-08-02
| | Subject: Re: Nothing to do... Sun Sep 02, 2007 8:14 pm | |
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ikari214567
CPRan Senior
Number of posts : 121
Age : 33
Localisation : Fairview, Quezon City
Registration date : 2007-08-02
| | Subject: Re: Nothing to do... Sat Sep 08, 2007 12:32 am | |
| ArcMithril... Update... Starshower, it was the signal of destiny. For everything was changing
,but I stayed the same, with sweet beginnings and bitter ends. I run the road to freedom. Seeking hope on my first step and finding disssappointment in the last, for my light blackens and sorrows nests. I feel trembling sounds of fear everytime you are away. This deep and dark paths are being lighted with your radiant smile, a smile that pauses me each time I stare. Sweet chills run through my bones, for in silence there is passion and in passion there is love. words and actions maybe plausible and very pursuading, but I am different. Now that I've loved you, there's no return. I'll kiss you, but nobody needs to know. All my life, I've never felt so wanted. So let me repay you by saying infront of the starshowers, I love you... Please comment on it. No violent reactions please... | |
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